29 Following

The Book Hammock (Eleanor)

I read a lot. I review 98% of what I read. I post my stuff on my blog. Oh... in between I try to live life.

Bodies of Work - Etienne It pains me to give this book only 2 stars. But I have to.The story has so much potential. TONS!But all the characters sound the same, talk the same, have the same constant phrases. And those phrases repeat and repeat and repeat. It just doesn't make sense.There's not enough depth and development, and the language is choppy. I wish there was a good beta that could sit with Etienne and work with him on this because again, this has potential to be such a successful story.